The images you chose work excellently as a series. I like the way you are playing with different forms of the same subject matter, such as the “fake” house contrasted with the “real” one. The different depictions of the glass are interesting when contrasted and the strategy implies that there are multiple ways of seeing it. The dark blacks work well with your images--especially because some of them have black that fills the frame with light that is isolated, and some of the blacks are isolated inside whites. The seahorse pattern blending into the next frame with the glass is interesting and tricks the eye. To me this strategy implies that our eyes can be tricked, which is something you can keep thinking about moving forward. Formally there are some images that could use a little more contrast, but overall I think you’ve got the editing down. Good job!
The images you chose work excellently as a series. I like the way you are playing with different forms of the same subject matter, such as the “fake” house contrasted with the “real” one. The different depictions of the glass are interesting when contrasted and the strategy implies that there are multiple ways of seeing it.
ReplyDeleteThe dark blacks work well with your images--especially because some of them have black that fills the frame with light that is isolated, and some of the blacks are isolated inside whites.
The seahorse pattern blending into the next frame with the glass is interesting and tricks the eye. To me this strategy implies that our eyes can be tricked, which is something you can keep thinking about moving forward.
Formally there are some images that could use a little more contrast, but overall I think you’ve got the editing down. Good job!