You did a great job experimenting with your compositions and camera mechanics. The most successful images are the panning shot, the shallow shots and the image of the goat (because of the way you experimented with focus and light). I want to encourage you to experiment even further by thinking about the entire frame, and how all of the elements within it add to the overall meaning/narrative of the image. How can you push these images further to create a more compelling, and unique narrative? The images have good tonal range, but need more brightness and contrast (otherwise they will print too dark). When you are editing on your computer, make sure the screen is at 60% brightness instead of 100%, so that your images don’t end up being too dark when we begin printing. Also start thinking of how you can push your images to not fall into the “conventional” genres of photography. Overall, good job and keep up the experimenting!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job experimenting with your compositions and camera mechanics. The most successful images are the panning shot, the shallow shots and the image of the goat (because of the way you experimented with focus and light). I want to encourage you to experiment even further by thinking about the entire frame, and how all of the elements within it add to the overall meaning/narrative of the image. How can you push these images further to create a more compelling, and unique narrative? The images have good tonal range, but need more brightness and contrast (otherwise they will print too dark). When you are editing on your computer, make sure the screen is at 60% brightness instead of 100%, so that your images don’t end up being too dark when we begin printing. Also start thinking of how you can push your images to not fall into the “conventional” genres of photography. Overall, good job and keep up the experimenting!