For my sequence of images I used the song 'Break' by Kero Kero Bonito. I took inspiration from the music video for the song (
link here) and from the lyrics themselves (both the English and
Japanese parts!) My story is essentially a girl is studying at the library, gets bored, and decides to take a break in various places around campus... eventually leading her to Taco Bell.
Contact Sheets
I’m not well informed about the song, but I do think the placement of the figure in the images are successful in capturing a narrative.
ReplyDeleteMaybe work on various ways of cropping or framing the subject because I see a reoccurring theme of the person being cropped just around her. Overall, some great compositions.
I think that there is a very clear narrative with it being shown every step of the way. I think the compositions could have been broken up by not focusing directly on the subject in some, or viewing her in a drastically different way.
ReplyDeleteThe narrative is clear in the series of photos, however, I believe the compositions could have been varied more.
ReplyDeleteThis sequence was humorous to me so I liked it. The boredom of the subject is clear and funny that she ended up at Taco Bell. If you want more diversity in the sequence you could take shots of the subject a bit farther away.
ReplyDelete